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I liked your use of unusual adjectives to describe common things: "warm gloom huddled close to the lamplight, aging glass...hung low... It gives these inanimate things a human feel which complements the surreal fantasy of the story.
Raid: Chapter 1: Offer of Gain
I liked your use of unusual adjectives to describe common things: "warm gloom huddled close to the lamplight, aging glass...hung low... It gives these inanimate things a human feel which complements the surreal fantasy of the story.