I liked your use of unusual adjectives to describe common things: "warm gloom huddled close to the lamplight, aging glass...hung low... It gives these inanimate things a human feel which complements the surreal fantasy of the story.
Thank you. I really want the world to feel both alive and lived in. II am glad that you noticed the surrealism. It is a major aspect of the story and I hope you enjoy the story as it develops and takes you deeper into the world of Nalea.
I liked your use of unusual adjectives to describe common things: "warm gloom huddled close to the lamplight, aging glass...hung low... It gives these inanimate things a human feel which complements the surreal fantasy of the story.
Thank you. I really want the world to feel both alive and lived in. II am glad that you noticed the surrealism. It is a major aspect of the story and I hope you enjoy the story as it develops and takes you deeper into the world of Nalea.